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I thought you were here, but you left
I thought I heard you, it was an illusion
I thought you cared, but I guess not
The only state left is confusion.

I thought we were family, did you disown me?
I thought we were close, the distance grows
I thought we were friends, words full of distain
What should we do because I don't know.

I thought about your truths and found lies
I thought I found you and not your disguise
I thought I could trust you and I still try
I even thought about saying good-bye

I thought you were more than my past
I thought I knew you, but not anymore
I thought your friends were a priority
Obviously I was wrong, since I'm the minority
©2006-2009 ~iondemuerto
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Not exactly my best... or really a poem to me...

its more my thoughts on some of the friends i once had... that think nothing has changed

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Oh M, its great!! Really, I like it!! It flows really nice, even though you said it was not as much of a poem as just your thoughts. It is not the same sad as the others....as in not so dark as heartbroken. Very well done. Sorry you feel like that though, but you get good poems out of the feelings. Nice to see you writting a bit again!

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